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A broke bounty hunter with schizophrenia and down to his final pill, must catch an elusive fugitive in extremely isolated territory before his hallucinations kick in.
This sounds like it has interesting elements, but they're hard to pick out from the logline.Why not use a big event as the inciting incident and have the bounty hunter stranded in the wilderness with the killer, this way, his running out of pills is clearly related to the plot.For example:After a boRead more
This sounds like it has interesting elements, but they’re hard to pick out from the logline.
Why not use a big event as the inciting incident and have the bounty hunter stranded in the wilderness with the killer, this way, his running out of pills is clearly related to the plot.
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See lessAfter a bounty hunter with schizophrenia crashes in the wilderness, a murderous fugitive in his custody runs away, he must now re capture the killer in order to save his own life before his medication runs out.
A troubled young woman, tying to outrun an oppressive past, flees to the outback, only to find herself in the way of an ancient malevolent spirit awakened by a thirst for revenge and hell bent on destruction.
What does "...oppressed..." mean in specific and visual terms? How is it relevant to the plot of defeating the monster?This logline is vague and confusing, mostly as a result of it lacking a clear plot and motivation. I suggest reveres engineering the logline from the goal. What specifically does thRead more
What does “…oppressed…” mean in specific and visual terms? How is it relevant to the plot of defeating the monster?
This logline is vague and confusing, mostly as a result of it lacking a clear plot and motivation. I suggest reveres engineering the logline from the goal. What specifically does the MC need to achieve by the end of the story?
See lessThe naive daughter of the police chief gets a taste of criminal life after using her father?s car to sneak out and setting out to steal it back from car thieves before he or any other cop finds out.
Agreed with Richiev, the wording is standing in the way of clarity. Are the stakes her father losing his beloved car or her coping the blame for the car being stolen?
Agreed with Richiev, the wording is standing in the way of clarity.
Are the stakes her father losing his beloved car or her coping the blame for the car being stolen?
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