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  1. Posted: August 23, 2017In: Romance

    When an aspiring writer blogs anonymously about her dates, one of them finds out who she is and continues dating her in order to improve his dating style to ask out someone else.

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    Added an answer on August 24, 2017 at 1:49 pm

    This kind of sounds like all single men - go out with one woman, if it doesn't go well try try again... What is the 'hook'? What about this stands out from the large number of other romance stories? Not sure how his actions make an audience want to go see the movie at home or the theater. Sorry forRead more

    This kind of sounds like all single men – go out with one woman, if it doesn’t go well try try again…

    What is the ‘hook’? What about this stands out from the large number of other romance stories?

    Not sure how his actions make an audience want to go see the movie at home or the theater.

    Sorry for the negativity, simply being totally honest.

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  2. Posted: August 23, 2017In: Drama

    When an eccentric family moves into a defunct church building, the enigmatic grandfather starts to preach on Sundays, inspiring but stirring up trouble with the locals.

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    Added an answer on August 24, 2017 at 1:45 pm

    Faith based films have an audience but it is limited - not sure this would necessarily be a big sell. What motivates the grandfather and what specifically is it he wants to achieve?

    Faith based films have an audience but it is limited – not sure this would necessarily be a big sell.

    What motivates the grandfather and what specifically is it he wants to achieve?

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  3. Posted: August 23, 2017In: Drama

    After a twister transports a lonely Kansas farm girl to a magical land, she sets out on a dangerous journey to find a wizard with the powers to send her home.

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    Added an answer on August 24, 2017 at 1:39 pm

    Good logline. Perhaps would be best to mention the wicked witch of the west? After a tornado transports a Kansas girl to a magical land, she must defeat a wicked witch on her journey to find a wizard with the powers to send her home.

    Good logline. Perhaps would be best to mention the wicked witch of the west?

    After a tornado transports a Kansas girl to a magical land, she must defeat a wicked witch on her journey to find a wizard with the powers to send her home.

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