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Tehran Kids is a Persian Series about Group of Music that they wanna get justification But something unexpected occurs to each member of the group which The Group has placed collapse boundary.
Agreed with the above. Best to redraft this so it reads clearly and focuses on one main character.
Agreed with the above.
Best to redraft this so it reads clearly and focuses on one main character.
See lessWhen a 17 year old?s father is imprisoned she must outwit cops and criminals to get him out, whilst fooling social services into believing she can raise a previously estranged 11 year old brother.
Ahh the old "...outwit..." maneuver... What does "...outwit..." mean in practical terms? It's these details that will make your character's story interesting. How will she break him out? That's your hook. There must be a cool and interesting way for to achieve this goal or else the premise lacks creRead more
Ahh the old “…outwit…” maneuver…
What does “…outwit…” mean in practical terms? It’s these details that will make your character’s story interesting.
How will she break him out? That’s your hook. There must be a cool and interesting way for to achieve this goal or else the premise lacks credibility and originality – there have been many prison break films and shows over the years, this would have to stand out to get made.
See lessWhen a lonely computer programmer hacks a dating site, she inadvertently creates an empathetic Artificial Intelligence, which finds ?Mr. Right? just as the government terminates the A.I.
If the government terminated the AI, there's not much left for the MC to do. However, if the AI was put a risk by the government then the MC could fight to keep it/him alive. What is the MC's goal? This sounds like the start of a story but doesn't deliver on the promise of a dramatic need for the auRead more
If the government terminated the AI, there’s not much left for the MC to do. However, if the AI was put a risk by the government then the MC could fight to keep it/him alive.
What is the MC’s goal? This sounds like the start of a story but doesn’t deliver on the promise of a dramatic need for the audience/reader to want to follow.
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