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When a world renowned psychiatrist dies and goes to Hell, he is given a second chance at life to make amends with the family he ignored, not knowing he is part of a bigger plan for Hell to dominate Earth.
Agreed with the above. The inciting incident is really his realization that hell is about to take over the world, therefore, his subsequent goal needs to be formed in response to this. What is it he does to stop hell from rising to the surface?
Agreed with the above.
The inciting incident is really his realization that hell is about to take over the world, therefore, his subsequent goal needs to be formed in response to this.
What is it he does to stop hell from rising to the surface?
See lessA workaholic midwife becomes pregnant with twins after a drunken one night stand and with the help of her friends adjusts to her new life as a mother.
Agreed with the above comments. Adjusting to a new life is hardly material for a story, however, if she has a major obstacle to overcome as a result of the new life it could make for a story. What is it she does as a result of the pregnancy? Or rather, what is it she wants and does as a result of thRead more
Agreed with the above comments.
Adjusting to a new life is hardly material for a story, however, if she has a major obstacle to overcome as a result of the new life it could make for a story.
What is it she does as a result of the pregnancy? Or rather, what is it she wants and does as a result of the pregnancy?
See lessAn Amature Drug-dealer decides to sell drugs by Dark Web, But he realizes it is not like he thought.
And then what? What does he do as a result of the realization? That is your story and is currently missing in the logline. Best you re draft it so you start off on that realization and describe his actions thereafter. Be sure to clearly describe what specifically it is he is trying to achieve with hRead more
And then what?
What does he do as a result of the realization? That is your story and is currently missing in the logline.
Best you re draft it so you start off on that realization and describe his actions thereafter. Be sure to clearly describe what specifically it is he is trying to achieve with his drug dealing and wheeling. He is very un sympathetic at the moment – being a DRUG DEALER AND ALL, so can you give him a noble cause? In other words, make him have to do the wrong thing for the right reason.
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