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  1. Posted: July 28, 2017In: Horror

    After dying, Psychiatrist Ray Sandler and his secretary Caroline Neuwirth discover that they have gone to Hell and not Heaven. But there is hope in the form of Ben, a demon who offers both Ray and Caroline a chance to return to Earth, but at a cost. They must agree to get souls for Hell.

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    Added an answer on August 3, 2017 at 5:18 pm

    Please read the 'Formula' tab on the top bar.

    Please read the ‘Formula’ tab on the top bar.

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  2. Posted: July 28, 2017In: Drama

    Three estranged sisters need to overcome sibling rivalry when Alzheimer?s and stroke require they care for their parents as they discover what happiness and family truly are.

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    Added an answer on August 3, 2017 at 5:16 pm

    Agreed with DPG. To do justice to the many people dealing with Alzheimer's strokes - sufferers and family, I suggest framing the sister's story with in a clear plot. Give them an objective goal and a powerfull need, even if that is with in the family relationships it needs to be clearly motivating.

    Agreed with DPG.

    To do justice to the many people dealing with Alzheimer’s strokes – sufferers and family, I suggest framing the sister’s story with in a clear plot. Give them an objective goal and a powerfull need, even if that is with in the family relationships it needs to be clearly motivating.

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  3. Posted: July 28, 2017In: Comedy

    After being dumped a woman must survive in the city without her sugar daddy boyfriend and avoid the millennial fate, moving home with her parents.

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    Added an answer on August 2, 2017 at 11:03 pm

    What Foxtrot25 wrote. Define her in action towards a goal. Also, the stakes seem very low. Sure, moving back in with the folks is not nice, but it ain't story worthy not nice. What else can you give her as a motivation to make it on her own?

    What Foxtrot25 wrote.

    Define her in action towards a goal.

    Also, the stakes seem very low. Sure, moving back in with the folks is not nice, but it ain’t story worthy not nice. What else can you give her as a motivation to make it on her own?

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