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A disavowed scoutmaster visits a friend in Lebanon, and ends up leading a fledgling group of boys on a mission to save ancient relics from advancing terrorists.
Agreed with DPG. I'll add that there seems to be no cause and effect between the events. Why does him visitng a friend motivate him to save relics? This connection is not clear.
Agreed with DPG.
I’ll add that there seems to be no cause and effect between the events. Why does him visitng a friend motivate him to save relics? This connection is not clear.
See lessAn immature government programmer’s promotion is denied by his overbearing boss, so he resorts to childish pranks with his beleaguered coworkers in the hope he’ll get transferred.
The logline is too wordy. You can get rid of: "...immature..." this is evident,? "...overbearing..." adds little as he or she are already the bad guy or gal for denying the promotion, and "...childish..." is implied in the action. Also re state the actions and events in a causal manner, i.e: After hRead more
The logline is too wordy. You can get rid of: “…immature…” this is evident,? “…overbearing…” adds little as he or she are already the bad guy or gal for denying the promotion, and “…childish…” is implied in the action.
Also re state the actions and events in a causal manner, i.e:
After his promotion is denied by his supervisor, a government programmer resorts to pranks in an attempt to get fired.
Not sure there is enough meat on the proverbial bones for a whole feature here,? a short perhaps but a 85+ minute film not so much.
See lessA skeptical priest is sent to investigate when the reverend of a small farming community claims to have found the next Messiah in a shy teenage boy. (26)
The theology at the base of your concept doesn't work. According to Christianity, Jesus will return - he is the Messiah, not some one else. If this boy is Jesus 2.0 then describe him as such, otherwise, it reads as if this other person is the Messiah which is true in Judaism.
The theology at the base of your concept doesn’t work. According to Christianity, Jesus will return – he is the Messiah, not some one else. If this boy is Jesus 2.0 then describe him as such, otherwise, it reads as if this other person is the Messiah which is true in Judaism.
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