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After a near drowning makes him the target of an evil spirit, an avoidant teenager must endure hellish heat when a bushfire threatens to destroy his hideout. (27)
Is this a short film? If it is a short, then his action of surviving in the hide out could work, but if this is a feature then I don't see how his action is enough to sustain the audience throughout the whole film. Regardless the format, I believe if you give him a more compelling goal the concept wRead more
Is this a short film?
If it is a short, then his action of surviving in the hide out could work, but if this is a feature then I don’t see how his action is enough to sustain the audience throughout the whole film.
Regardless the format, I believe if you give him a more compelling goal the concept would improve. Why not make it so he must kill or banish the creature? This way his obstacle is greater and he is an active protagonist. Otherwise, he hides, the creature can’t get to him, he survives and ends the story the same way he began it, whereas good stories give the MC the ability to overcome obstacles and better their lives.
See less“Stranded in Mexico without ID, a down and out Mexican American must sneak back over the boarder if he’s to achieve his dream of seeing his beloved East L.A. again” (A logline example for the movie “Born in East L.A.”)
Havn't seen this one, so can't make any good comments. It does sound very good a film, is to see LA again all he wants, really?
Havn’t seen this one, so can’t make any good comments. It does sound very good a film, is to see LA again all he wants, really?
See lessWhen she is targeted by a rival tech firm for software code in her head, a closed off data courier with a photographic memory must finish her latest delivery to survive. Only problem: For some reason, she can’t remember ever accepting the job.
Tha stakes are not clear in this logline. Will she be killed if she fails to deliver the data (aware of it or not)?What happens if she does deliver the data? Will other people be in danger? If so, she may have a big dillema to face, but this needs to be described clearly otherwise I'm not sure why sRead more
Tha stakes are not clear in this logline. Will she be killed if she fails to deliver the data (aware of it or not)?
What happens if she does deliver the data? Will other people be in danger? If so, she may have a big dillema to face, but this needs to be described clearly otherwise I’m not sure why she wouldn’t just deliver the data.
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