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A renegade priest confesses to a detective the origin story of his uncanny ability to put “The Fear of God” into any man. (23)
Billy14, A logline is a description of a plot, and a plot is a sequence of events and actions taken towards a single goal. So, if you want some help with this logline, here are a few questions you'll need to answer before anyone here will be able to give you concrete advice about your logline: WhatRead more
Billy14,
A logline is a description of a plot, and a plot is a sequence of events and actions taken towards a single goal.
So, if you want some help with this logline, here are a few questions you’ll need to answer before anyone here will be able to give you concrete advice about your logline:
What is your MC’s flaw?
What is your MC’s inciting incident?
What is your MC’s main action?
What is your MC’s goal?
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The MC comes across as farcical (good for comedy) but also insane to think this plan would work (might also be good for comedy, can't say). Ultimately, the suspension of disbelief is going to be the biggest problem. If this is an Austin Powers style OTT 'anything goes' comedy, then sure any plan wilRead more
The MC comes across as farcical (good for comedy) but also insane to think this plan would work (might also be good for comedy, can’t say). Ultimately, the suspension of disbelief is going to be the biggest problem. If this is an Austin Powers style OTT ‘anything goes’ comedy, then sure any plan will do, but if this is meant to be a more gritty/reality based comedy I doubt the plan will work.
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It sounds like the inciting incident is his discovery of the secret society, not the car accident. As a result of discovering the secret society and their plan he has to stop them. Best to redraft the logline with that in mind - cause and effect.
It sounds like the inciting incident is his discovery of the secret society, not the car accident. As a result of discovering the secret society and their plan he has to stop them. Best to redraft the logline with that in mind – cause and effect.
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