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When a desperate Wisconsin farm wife invites WWII Nazi POWs to work the family orchard, she brings the war home.
Check ot the 'Formula' tab. It outlines the crucial elements of a logline - inciting incident, character flaw, motivation and goal.
Check ot the ‘Formula’ tab. It outlines the crucial elements of a logline – inciting incident, character flaw, motivation and goal.
See lessA bitter yet compliant African slave is killed for a crime he didn?t commit and is revived through black magic. Upon discovering he?s immortal, he?ll spend decades trying to recover what was stolen from him. New Logline: After a revived African slave discovers he is immortal after being framed for murder, he spends each passing century fighting bigotry to end how blacks are viewed in America. 5/3/2017
This latest draft is convoluted and a bit messy as it lacks a description of his action throughout the series. In Forever the MC is a medical examiner for the Police, and the action he pursues in each episode throughout the series is catching killers. In this logline you wrote he fights against raciRead more
This latest draft is convoluted and a bit messy as it lacks a description of his action throughout the series. In Forever the MC is a medical examiner for the Police, and the action he pursues in each episode throughout the series is catching killers. In this logline you wrote he fights against racism against black people, why not change it so he fights bigotry – it’s not just black people who suffered from racism…
More so why not be more specific and write that he fights slavery? Slavery is the source of his pain so it would be fitting for him to want to stop it.
My suggestion:
See lessAfter a revived slave discovers he is immortal on a slave traders ship, he spends each passing century fighting bigotry and abolish slavery around the world.
Dear fellow writers, I wanted to share with you the good news about the release of my latest little project – a comedy web series titled God’s 17. You can check out our latest episode on our website: www.gods17.com
Hi guys,God?s 17 is a mockumentary web series about a modern day cult, it satirizes politics, major religions and activist groups. The series was entirely self-funded and independently produced. We included French and Spanish subtitles on the Youtube channel for the benefit of a wider audience.PleasRead more
Hi guys,
God?s 17 is a mockumentary web series about a modern day cult, it satirizes politics, major religions and activist groups. The series was entirely self-funded and independently produced. We included French and Spanish subtitles on the Youtube channel for the benefit of a wider audience.
Please check out our latest episode on Youtube or our website.
I hope you enjoy it, and if you see fit, share it with your friends.
Thanks for reading,
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