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  1. Posted: April 23, 2017In: Comedy

    a loser terrorist wants to go to heaven tries to find the bomb he lost to explode it.

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    Added an answer on April 25, 2017 at 5:06 pm

    What if you switched the stakes around? What if an Islamic terrorist changes religions, now in order to go to heaven he must find the bomb he lost in neutralize it instead.

    What if you switched the stakes around?
    What if an Islamic terrorist changes religions, now in order to go to heaven he must find the bomb he lost in neutralize it instead.

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  2. Posted: April 24, 2017In: Horror

    A group of fishermen must save their lives from bloodthirsty unseen supernatural being, after their fishing boat runs aground in misty sea.

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    Added an answer on April 25, 2017 at 4:55 pm

    The father/son story is the B plot, it need not be mentioned in the logline - best to focus on the A plot, which is to escape the boat. This is a good example of a genre movie, like you said, a monster in the house or supernatural thriller, they're relatively straight forward plot wise and always haRead more

    The father/son story is the B plot, it need not be mentioned in the logline – best to focus on the A plot, which is to escape the boat. This is a good example of a genre movie, like you said, a monster in the house or supernatural thriller, they’re relatively straight forward plot wise and always have an audience.

    Best to specify the MC as either the father or son, for example:
    After a fishing troller runs aground, the injured captain’s son must lead the crew to safety away from a bloodthirsty being that rose from the depth on the night they crashed.

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  3. Posted: April 24, 2017In: Drama

    When during a famine a loving Eskimo grandmother is abandoned by her migrating family, she reflects on her past life and faces inevitable death.

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    Added an answer on April 25, 2017 at 4:47 pm

    Agreed with Richiev and DPG, reflecting on its own is not an action fit for a film, the MC needs to pursue a specific outer goal. Could the grandmother want to break with tradition and fight for survival on her own?

    Agreed with Richiev and DPG, reflecting on its own is not an action fit for a film, the MC needs to pursue a specific outer goal.
    Could the grandmother want to break with tradition and fight for survival on her own?

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