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Hey, what a great idea - see you all there. Nir.
Hey, what a great idea – see you all there.
Nir.
See lessA 20th Century future king with the wisdom of King Solomon and the skills of Bruce Lee must overcome the evils of the royal family.
Hard to add anything of much value to this thread, but I will say that a mix of martial arts and monarch drama sounds very interesting. I look forward to reading future drafts of this.
Hard to add anything of much value to this thread, but I will say that a mix of martial arts and monarch drama sounds very interesting.
See lessI look forward to reading future drafts of this.
When a feisty child psychologist fights the system to save a haunted boy, she?s fired but what she discover changes them all.
Agreed with DPG.The story seems to start after she is fired - this is her inciting incident. You could make her resulting goal to get her job back and her motivation to save the haunted boy.
Agreed with DPG.
The story seems to start after she is fired – this is her inciting incident.
See lessYou could make her resulting goal to get her job back and her motivation to save the haunted boy.