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  1. Posted: April 22, 2017In: Comedy

    EVERYTHING I KNOW ABOUT WOODY ALLEN AND A FEW THINGS I MADE UP – A nebbish Indian boy convinced he’s telepathically linked to Woody Allen learns critical life lessons from colorful characters when he embarks on an adventure to find Woody in NY

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    Added an answer on April 22, 2017 at 12:32 pm

    Telepathically linked or not, why does he need to find Woody? And to that matter, what is is his goal beyond finding him? What will he achieve?

    Telepathically linked or not, why does he need to find Woody? And to that matter, what is is his goal beyond finding him? What will he achieve?

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  2. Posted: April 21, 2017In: Drama

    Invincible

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    Added an answer on April 21, 2017 at 2:15 pm

    Agreed with Richiev. In the interconnected world of today, exposure means very little. So many things are being exposed every minute of every day that most people have become desensitized to sensationalist click-bait. If anything, you would need? the doctor thrown in jail instead of merely exposingRead more

    Agreed with Richiev.
    In the interconnected world of today, exposure means very little. So many things are being exposed every minute of every day that most people have become desensitized to sensationalist click-bait. If anything, you would need? the doctor thrown in jail instead of merely exposing him.

    Regardless though the logline is too long, the above suggestion is a good re-write as an improvement but I believe the story starts after her brother is kidnapped.

    My try:
    After her brother is taken by a mad scientist, a paranoid schoolgirl with mind control powers must use her ability given to her by the culprit to put him behind bars.

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  3. Posted: April 20, 2017In: SciFi

    WHEN IS WINTER – After all clocks mysteriously stop and the stars begin moving randomly, a terminally ill U.S. President is elected to lead the earth out of the chaos thats growing in a world that can’t tell time.

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    Added an answer on April 20, 2017 at 12:47 pm

    Is this concept going to deal with the science of solving the 'time issue' or the politics of it? It isn't clear whether the film will tell the story of a politician putting together the resources needed for the science comunity to do their thing, or a genius directly working on space time himself tRead more

    Is this concept going to deal with the science of solving the ‘time issue’ or the politics of it?

    It isn’t clear whether the film will tell the story of a politician putting together the resources needed for the science comunity to do their thing, or a genius directly working on space time himself to solve the problem. In other words, the main action the main character will take is unclear. Richiev made some good suggestions, best to look at them in more detail.

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