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A Psy-Cop enters the mind of a killer on death row in an attempt to unlock a suppressed memory that may prove his innocence.
Agreed with Craig and DPG. I'll add that memories are subjective, we often remember by association so our own impressions can skew the true events in a memory. How then can the cop or detective rely on what he or she finds?
Agreed with Craig and DPG.
I’ll add that memories are subjective, we often remember by association so our own impressions can skew the true events in a memory. How then can the cop or detective rely on what he or she finds?
See lessMY SKIN FLUTE ? A poor porn addicted musician sells his Down Syndrome baby on the spare parts black market for a new electric clarinet after he?s presented with a life changing opportunity. Now he must evade the irate mother and his haunting conscience while pursuing his dream of being the first clarinet playing rock star.
You lost me after "...sells his Down Syndrome baby on the spare parts black market for a new electric clarinet..." there is no coming back from that - the MC should rot in jail for the rest of his life, only to be swiftly followed by a painful eternity in hell, if it exists in this story world (whicRead more
You lost me after “…sells his Down Syndrome baby on the spare parts black market for a new electric clarinet…” there is no coming back from that – the MC should rot in jail for the rest of his life, only to be swiftly followed by a painful eternity in hell, if it exists in this story world (which hopefully it does…).
In order for this concept to be taken seriously, fix the above before anything else is touched.
See lessLAKSMHI SINGS THE BLUES – When a manic depressive New Yorker visiting India has an psychotic episode in Mumbai, she is involuntarily hospitalized in a lunatic asylum. Inside she meets an unlikely group who together battle their mental illnesses through the power of music and dance in this beautiful triumph of the human spirit story.
What is the goal? What is the MC trying to achieve? "...triumph of the human spirit..." is present in all stories to some degree, how specifically is this manifested in yours?
What is the goal?
What is the MC trying to achieve?
“…triumph of the human spirit…” is present in all stories to some degree, how specifically is this manifested in yours?
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