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YOKO – Based on true events – Told from Japanese artist Yoko Ono’s perspective – The story of how she and Megastar John Lennon fell in love in 1966 and the incredibly powerful forces that tried to tear them apart.
Agreed with Karel. Of all the events that happened in their lives together which were can be used as a basis for a plot? In other words, which of the situations they faced together gave them a goal to pursue?
Agreed with Karel.
Of all the events that happened in their lives together which were can be used as a basis for a plot?
See lessIn other words, which of the situations they faced together gave them a goal to pursue?
Astrolia: When a man goes missing on an archaeological dig his brilliant but narrow-minded niece discovers his secret double life and her own connection to an ancient prophecy in a world she never knew existed.
The description of each element must be heavily pregnant with information for a logline to be effective, yet there is a severe lack of detail in this logline.Here is an example: "...When a man goes missing..." means very little when first read as it describes half the human race. Later in the loglinRead more
The description of each element must be heavily pregnant with information for a logline to be effective, yet there is a severe lack of detail in this logline.
Here is an example: “…When a man goes missing…” means very little when first read as it describes half the human race. Later in the logline it’s revealed that this is, in fact, the uncle of the protagonist. Why not describe him as who he is i.e; After her uncle goes missing…
The lack of clarity aside, the plot is vague – what does she do? What is the MC’s goal after the uncle goes missing she needs to act but it isn’t clear, from the logline, what her action will be. All story mediums film, TV and web series need a main character in pursuit of a goal, what’s hers?
See lessFAKING THE BAND After concocting a scheme to achieve popularity and infamy a junior high rock band is forced to confront the fact they can?t play a single song when a spiteful teacher plans to expose their charade by awarding them a spot in the schools annual variety show.
What starts them off on their journey, in other words, what is the motivating event or inciting incident?in addition, it isn't clear what they will do.? How will they achieve their goal, which is also unclear what specifically do they want?Lastly, who is the protagonist?A story needs to be defined bRead more
What starts them off on their journey, in other words, what is the motivating event or inciting incident?
in addition, it isn’t clear what they will do.? How will they achieve their goal, which is also unclear what specifically do they want?
Lastly, who is the protagonist?
A story needs to be defined by a framework of a finite number of events – start, middle, and end, a logline should to describe these clearly.
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