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A space explorer leads an expedition after believing to have discovered paradise which gradually descends into madness.
Is finding paradise the inciting incident? If so what is the causal connection to his goal? And as Richiev asked, what is his goal?
Is finding paradise the inciting incident? If so what is the causal connection to his goal? And as Richiev asked, what is his goal?
See lessTHE BEAST OF JAIPUR – When a lonely leper from the Untouchable class in modern day India ‘s only friend – a precocious 8 year old girl – is abducted by an evil supernatural figure and forced into sex slavery, he must overcome his debilitating disease and risk his life to rescue her.
Not sure how one overcomes leprosy, would he not need treatment to be cured? Leprosy is not a character flaw it's a medical condition. Seeing as he is the hero that will save the girl, what character flaw can you give him that will provide him with a good inner journey on his way to achieving his ouRead more
Not sure how one overcomes leprosy, would he not need treatment to be cured?
See lessLeprosy is not a character flaw it’s a medical condition. Seeing as he is the hero that will save the girl, what character flaw can you give him that will provide him with a good inner journey on his way to achieving his outer goal?
The Descent to Madness: When a mad movie director wreaks havoc on the set of his latest passion project, a selfish movie mogul must decide on the future of his legacy or the sanity of his friend.
Agreed with DPG. Also, the connection between the crazy director and movie mogul is unclear. In other words, the causal connection between the events in your story is weak, why must the mogul do what it is he does? Secondly, the stakes seem low, what's the worst that would happen should he fail?
Agreed with DPG.
Also, the connection between the crazy director and movie mogul is unclear. In other words, the causal connection between the events in your story is weak, why must the mogul do what it is he does?
Secondly, the stakes seem low, what’s the worst that would happen should he fail?
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