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  1. Posted: April 5, 2017In: Drama

    When his breakthrough idea got stolen,an aspiring TV writer must fight to keep both his job and sanity

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    Neer Shelter Singularity
    Added an answer on April 5, 2017 at 11:03 pm

    What, in practical terms, manifests him keeping his job and sanity? This would be his goal and needs to be specified in the logline. More so, how he fights to do so is his action and also needs to be described.Without these descriptions the plot is vague and story unclear so best to re draft with thRead more

    What, in practical terms, manifests him keeping his job and sanity? This would be his goal and needs to be specified in the logline. More so, how he fights to do so is his action and also needs to be described.

    Without these descriptions the plot is vague and story unclear so best to re draft with the action and goal.

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  2. Posted: April 5, 2017In: Drama

    What do u guys think?

    Neer Shelter Singularity
    Added an answer on April 5, 2017 at 10:57 pm

    What, in practical terms, manifests him keeping his job and sanity? This would be his goal and needs to be specified in the logline. More so, how he fights to do so is his action and also needs to be described. Without these descriptions the plot is vague, and story unclear so best to re draft withRead more

    What, in practical terms, manifests him keeping his job and sanity? This would be his goal and needs to be specified in the logline. More so, how he fights to do so is his action and also needs to be described.

    Without these descriptions the plot is vague, and story unclear so best to re draft with the action and goal.

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  3. Posted: April 4, 2017In: Action

    Her Ranger squad K.I.A , team leader and lone survivor Jo Rose is dishonourably discharged. Now a cash-strapped hitwoman, with a sister fallen to cancer, Jo must navigate the vicious world of professional hits and custody of her sisters kids, while surviving merciless Rangers that seek revenge.

    Neer Shelter Singularity
    Added an answer on April 5, 2017 at 2:56 pm

    There are a lot of suggestions thrown around on this thread. However, I think best to focus your next draft of this logline on one inciting incident and one goal, thoughts about story world expansion should only come after you have one good plot for one good movie. What is her inciting incident whicRead more

    There are a lot of suggestions thrown around on this thread. However, I think best to focus your next draft of this logline on one inciting incident and one goal, thoughts about story world expansion should only come after you have one good plot for one good movie.

    What is her inciting incident which logically motivates her to achieve one goal in this one plot?

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