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After witnessing a UFO crash landing, a precocious silver miner’s daughter tries to make sense of her place in the universe. Too bad, she?s brought the alien home with her.
Agreed with Knightrider. I'll add that loglines are better written with fewer words, so best cut anything extraneous.? "...Too bad, she?s brought the alien home with her." Can be cut, it's more of a tagline style clause as it contributes very little to the plot. On another note, best avoid making thRead more
Agreed with Knightrider.
I’ll add that loglines are better written with fewer words, so best cut anything extraneous.? “…Too bad, she?s brought the alien home with her.” Can be cut, it’s more of a tagline style clause as it contributes very little to the plot.
On another note, best avoid making this seem too similar to another movie about a young person finding an alien…
See lessEDIT: After her farm goes into foreclosure, a naive cowgirl falls in love with a misogynistic cowboy, only to find out that they both compete against each other for $100,000 at a rodeo event.
Agreed, sweet as a poetry contest could be, it simply doesn't stack up to logic. Poetry could be a hobby of hers something she does on the side, but then it shouldn't be mentioned in the logline.
Agreed, sweet as a poetry contest could be, it simply doesn’t stack up to logic. Poetry could be a hobby of hers something she does on the side, but then it shouldn’t be mentioned in the logline.
See less?A young mother?s life descends into chaos, when her husband talks her into helping him complete a job, as a contract killer, assassinating drug dealers, in the Philippines, but when a job goes wrong, and as a result, her husband is killed, and her children kidnapped, she will stop at nothing to meet revenge and save her kids.? ? SHABU by Judah Ray ?
What DPG wrote. There are too many events and characters described in the latest draft of the logline. Bellow is my attempt at simplifying the logline: After her husband, a hit-man, is killed on the job, a mother of two must assume his identity to complete his contracts if she is to save her childreRead more
What DPG wrote.
There are too many events and characters described in the latest draft of the logline.
Bellow is my attempt at simplifying the logline:
See lessAfter her husband, a hit-man, is killed on the job, a mother of two must assume his identity to complete his contracts if she is to save her children.