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Trapped in a high rise residential building a group of neighbors must learn to work together to escape their culprit.
Agreed with SouthWestSusie. What is the big obstacles for them to overcome? Also, there have been many 'trapped in a building with a crazy guy' movies and shows to date, what makes this standout and different to the others?
Agreed with SouthWestSusie.
What is the big obstacles for them to overcome?
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Your body is the asset, Social class is the Pyramid Scheme. California is the Guinea Pig & Chance is the Prodigal Son.
Agreed with DPG. This logline is confusing as the plot is unclear. Think of a logline as a simple statement of the major plot points and elements in a story: Story element 1 - main character, who is the one person that will be taking the main action in the story to achieve a goal? First major plot pRead more
Agreed with DPG.
This logline is confusing as the plot is unclear.
Think of a logline as a simple statement of the major plot points and elements in a story:
Story element 1 – main character, who is the one person that will be taking the main action in the story to achieve a goal?
First major plot point – inciting incident, what in your story forces the main character to take action in the first place?
Story element 2 – obstacle, what stands in the way of the main character achieving his or her goal?
Second major plot point – what is the goal the main character will achieve by the end of the story?
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Agreed with DPG. The concept is unclear, is the whole film a screen adaptation of his dreams and thoughts? Or is the action seen on screen what happens around him? Also, If he is in a coma, what actually happens? what starts him on his journey? What forces him into action? Lastly, and most importantRead more
Agreed with DPG.
The concept is unclear, is the whole film a screen adaptation of his dreams and thoughts? Or is the action seen on screen what happens around him?
Also, If he is in a coma, what actually happens? what starts him on his journey? What forces him into action?
Lastly, and most importantly, what is his goal and how is the audience privy to it?
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