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A socially awkward author from New York City only leaves his apartment at night until he falls in love with an ambitious politician who is spending every day in front of a camera.
Good advice above.Most good romcoms have a plot device, story element or character that provides the MC with an obstacle for being with their one true love. I feel like this concept needs something or someone keeping the author from pursuing the relationship. Bit cliche' but what if the politician wRead more
Good advice above.
Most good romcoms have a plot device, story element or character that provides the MC with an obstacle for being with their one true love. I feel like this concept needs something or someone keeping the author from pursuing the relationship. Bit cliche’ but what if the politician was engaged to a douche bag?
See lessOr his or her parents are against the politician being in a relationship with the author?
Or the politician is sent to a far away place and the author must travel to be with him or her?
When their worlds fall apart over the same week, three disenchanted, cash-strapped girlfriends make a pact to attempt three wild ways to make it big ? and get rich – fast.
Agreed with the above. All I will add is best to remove redundant descriptions for example "...over the same week..." has no impact on the story and the logline can do with out it.
Agreed with the above. All I will add is best to remove redundant descriptions for example “…over the same week…” has no impact on the story and the logline can do with out it.
See lessWhen an innocent girl enters the kill zone for a drone attack, the mission commander must overcome legal and ethical objections to get permission to execute Kenyan terrorists on the verge of a suicide mission.
Now I'm going to sound horrible, but it's only logic. When given the choice between one innocent person (girl) and many (terror attack) the choice is clear - save the many. I would argue that there is no choice to be made - it's not a lesser of two evils rather a heart-breaking order to give and exeRead more
Now I’m going to sound horrible, but it’s only logic. When given the choice between one innocent person (girl) and many (terror attack) the choice is clear – save the many. I would argue that there is no choice to be made – it’s not a lesser of two evils rather a heart-breaking order to give and execute.? However, if the terrorists were only suspected of planning an attack i.e they may or may not kill many people, then there is a choice to be made.
I haven’t seen the film so I don’t know what actually happens.
Furthermore, it sounds to me like the girl wondering into the kill zone is the inciting incident. The mission goes to plan up until her walking into the kill zone, her unexpected presence throws a proverbial spanner in, and forces the mission commander to take action. If it wasn;t for the girl there would be no dilemma and no story.
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