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When an mysterious artifact appears on the black market, a pair of dealers must outsmart the criminals of the city’s underworld in order to attain it.
How does the artefact impact the main characters? Is it purley a financial interest or is there more? The artefact appearing doesn't make for a very good inciting incident, is there something else that happens that motivates the main characters to have to take action? Lastly, why two MCs would the sRead more
How does the artefact impact the main characters? Is it purley a financial interest or is there more? The artefact appearing doesn’t make for a very good inciting incident, is there something else that happens that motivates the main characters to have to take action?
Lastly, why two MCs would the story not work just as well with one? If so best to re work it to be about one character.
See lessWhen an exhausted Driver contemplating a life change, receives an ultimatum to go into work on his day off. He must deal with an assorted bunch of characters, who will shape what direction he will take his life.
What the others wrote. I'll add that the logline needs to describe a starting and ending point, in other words inciting incident and goal. As Richiev wrote, describe his goal in detail. However, also describe? what motivated him to achieve this goal. In this case what specific event motivated him toRead more
What the others wrote.
I’ll add that the logline needs to describe a starting and ending point, in other words inciting incident and goal.
As Richiev wrote, describe his goal in detail. However, also describe? what motivated him to achieve this goal. In this case what specific event motivated him to HAVE to change his life?
See lessWhen a stuttering prince unexpectedly becomes King of England, he struggles to overcome the debilitating condition and rally the British at the outbreak of WWII.
Great work on this concept. I must add, however, that the importance of the actual speech can't be overlooked - it's his outer goal. After a stuttering prince unexpectedly becomes King of England, he must overcome his disability to rally the English people against Hitler in a historical speech. He wRead more
Great work on this concept.
I must add, however, that the importance of the actual speech can’t be overlooked – it’s his outer goal.
After a stuttering prince unexpectedly becomes King of England, he must overcome his disability to rally the English people against Hitler in a historical speech.
He will continue to rally his people even after the speech, but it’s the speech that ends the story in the film and gives him the time frame and urgency of a ticking bomb.
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