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A hacker must shut down the latest social media craze, The MindNet, after illegally connecting his mind with network?s creator and discovering a plan to use the MindNet as a means of population control.
I suggest you study the Training tab up top. This logline is too long and describes far too many events for it to work well. Here is a simplification of your concept: The main character is a Hacker.? He or she witnesses government officials killing a new social network? technology's inventor.? His oRead more
I suggest you study the Training tab up top. This logline is too long and describes far too many events for it to work well.
Here is a simplification of your concept:
The main character is a Hacker.? He or she witnesses government officials killing a new social network? technology’s inventor.? His or her goal is to shut down the new technology to save the population.
What is unclear is how the murder makes him understand that the government intends to use the new technology for the wrong reasons. Why is he so motivated to shutting down the new technology? What is his MUST do or die moment?
See lessCelebrity hairdresser was falsely accused for kidnapping a secret son of the mayor of New York and he has to deliver him to a real kidnappers to save the life of his mother because of her large gambling debt.
The plot is unclear.Is this a story of the hairdresser clearing his name? Or is this the story of the hairdresser saving his mother?I'm sure you mean that the A plot is him saving his mother, but the first half of the logline describes something else. I suggest that you focus on one central plot inRead more
The plot is unclear.
Is this a story of the hairdresser clearing his name? Or is this the story of the hairdresser saving his mother?
I’m sure you mean that the A plot is him saving his mother, but the first half of the logline describes something else. I suggest that you focus on one central plot in the logline.?
See lessWhen his revengeful ex-wife murders one of his neighbors, a dismissed errant detective must use his unorthodox methods to help the police force bring her to justice.
That thing DPG wrote...
That thing DPG wrote…
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