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When a gifted nostalgia caseworker disappears, a Man and Woman use their third-mind to relate clues sifted via ghost impressions rising from the dust around them.
Isolate the central character and his or her need. What is his or her?motivation to achieving this?
Isolate the central character and his or her need. What is his or her?motivation to achieving this?
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What DPG wrote. Also I'll add that the key to a good logline is clarity - something sorely lacking in this instance. I don't want?to sound mean, however the sentence structure and order of the descriptions are simply very?confusing, and require multiple reads to make sense of. Think of a logline asRead more
What DPG wrote.
Also I’ll add that the key to a good logline is clarity – something sorely lacking in this instance. I don’t want?to sound mean, however the sentence structure and order of the descriptions are simply very?confusing, and require multiple reads to make sense of.
Think of a logline as a guid to helping the reader?follow the bouncing ball of your narrative. It needs to be a simple description of a dramatic need, obstacle and goal.
For example:
See lessA bad thing happens to a flawed character motivating him to take action to achieve a compelling goal. Now replace the words of this sentence with the events and SIMPLE descriptions of your story, but keep the order.
Two fed-up women take off for a weekend getaway but when one is almost raped and the other kills the guy the holiday turns into a road trip to escape to Mexico.
Hi SouthWestSuiseYes. You describe the inciting incident - killing the sexual assailant, too late in the logline. Everything before that event can be cut from the logline - it doesn't directly describe the A plot.
Hi SouthWestSuise
Yes. You describe the inciting incident – killing the sexual assailant, too late in the logline. Everything before that event can be cut from the logline – it doesn’t directly describe the A plot.
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