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A savvy, overly confident uni student sets up a food delivery business as a front for drug trafficking, but when his operation is exposed he fakes his death on a hiking trip, but one detective won?t accept his disappearance until the search reveals his body, dead or alive.
I see what you're trying to do by making him a social conscious drug dealer. Unfortunately it ain't enough - he is a drug dealer. Any character that seeks to find gain in other people's substance addiction, legal or not, with knowledge of the harm it does is acting in an un ethical way. Would you saRead more
I see what you’re trying to do by making him a social conscious drug dealer. Unfortunately it ain’t enough – he is a drug dealer.
Any character that seeks to find gain in other people’s substance addiction, legal or not, with knowledge of the harm it does is acting in an un ethical way.
Would you say that tobacco companies are socially conscious? They fall in to the same paradigm as your MC’s…
You would need to work doubly hard to make a person who makes and or sells drugs empathetic, look at Walter White as a good example – a complex plot and set up was needed to form empathy in?the audience during season one.
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But what will they actually do? What will be their main action? Who is the main character? Why is the main character so suspicious of this cube? What happened that made the main character think the aliens are a threat? I think the logline lacks too much detail, and as a result raises too many questiRead more
But what will they actually do? What will be their main action?
Who is the main character?
Why is the main character so suspicious of this cube? What happened that made the main character think the aliens are a threat?
I think the logline lacks too much detail, and as a result raises too many questions.
Check out the training tab on the top bar of this web sight for more information on logline construction.
In short, you need:
See lessA significant event which motivates a flawed main character to take action in order to achieve a compelling goal.
A savvy, overly confident uni student sets up a food delivery business as a front for drug trafficking, but when his operation is exposed he fakes his death on a hiking trip, but one detective won?t accept his disappearance until the search reveals his body, dead or alive.
Agreed with DPG.If the student is the MC he would need a noble reason for selling drugs. Could he have a sick mother, father, sibling or lover that needs the money for medication?
Agreed with DPG.
If the student is the MC he would need a noble reason for selling drugs. Could he have a sick mother, father, sibling or lover that needs the money for medication?
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