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After his twin brother is murdered while moonlighting as a vigilante, an introverted medical student dons his brother’s mask to hunt down his killers.
Agreed with DPG. Also, it seems a bit convenient (for the writer) that he chooses to become a vigilant in order to avenge his brother's death. Otherwise, with no fighting, or other wise vigilant, experience himself he could just have gone to the police to help catch the killer. It isn't made entirelRead more
Agreed with DPG.
Also, it seems a bit convenient (for the writer) that he chooses to become a vigilant in order to avenge his brother’s death. Otherwise, with no fighting, or other wise vigilant, experience himself he could just have gone to the police to help catch the killer. It isn’t made entirely clear why an other wise ill equipped brother goes out to catch the killer.
See lessIn a modern world full of super humans with special powers and abilities , An ordinary young boy who was born with no power dreams and works hard in order to become a strong super hero.
Good notes made above. In order to be as powerful as genuine super heroes, he would have to undergo either genetic changes or develop technology to enhance his abilities. I suggest you specify his inherit abilities that would make this possible, such as a genius with DNA sequencing or a marvel enginRead more
Good notes made above.
In order to be as powerful as genuine super heroes, he would have to undergo either genetic changes or develop technology to enhance his abilities. I suggest you specify his inherit abilities that would make this possible, such as a genius with DNA sequencing or a marvel engineer. ?Other wise his efforts seem to lack credibility, and subsequently render him delusional.
See lessAfter escaping from their previous lives, ten unrelated tenants seek refuge in a shared household to rebuild themselves for the better, only to be hindered by the oncoming cruelties that await them.
What DPG wrote. I'll only add that a good story needs a powerfully motivated character. This is best achieved?in the cause and effect relationship between the inciting incident and the goal, however in this instance the logline doesn't describe a single specific and significant event as the incitingRead more
What DPG wrote.
I’ll only add that a good story needs a powerfully motivated character. This is best achieved?in the cause and effect relationship between the inciting incident and the goal, however in this instance the logline doesn’t describe a single specific and significant event as the inciting incident.
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