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When characters in a virtual reality game rebel and take players hostage, a psychologist, specialising in human AI relationships, must prove to their leader that their sentience isn’t real in order to free the hostages.
How can a character in a VR game take anyone in the real world hostage? If there is a glitch in a game, the players simply remove the goggles and problem solved. Secondly the story seems very lean on plot. Once the logic flaw mentioned above is solved, what will the psychologist do for the whole movRead more
How can a character in a VR game take anyone in the real world hostage? If there is a glitch in a game, the players simply remove the goggles and problem solved.
Secondly the story seems very lean on plot. Once the logic flaw mentioned above is solved, what will the psychologist do for the whole movie? It can’t be just trying to convince an AI, it has to be more, otherwise there simply isn’t enough action to fill a feature length film. What else does he or she do?
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This is to vague and complex to pass as a logline. Best you review the Training tab up top to see what the critical components of a logline are. But to get you started on? your road to logline perfection: Who is the main character? What does he or she want? What is preventing them from getting whatRead more
This is to vague and complex to pass as a logline. Best you review the Training tab up top to see what the critical components of a logline are.
But to get you started on? your road to logline perfection:
Who is the main character?
What does he or she want?
What is preventing them from getting what they want?
Answer ONLY the above questions in a single sentance, and we will be able to help you construct a logline from that.
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In the last draft of the logline the stakes seem skewed - if she fails to achieve her goal a good thing happens. So society as a whole stands to gain if she fails, as money goes to charity. More to the point, her goal is utterly superficial and selfish - she's trying to prevent money from going to cRead more
In the last draft of the logline the stakes seem skewed – if she fails to achieve her goal a good thing happens.
So society as a whole stands to gain if she fails, as money goes to charity. More to the point, her goal is utterly superficial and selfish – she’s trying to prevent money from going to charity, and put it in to her own pocket. We want her to fail,? and she’s a white supremacist to boot!
Why, oh why, would the audience give her the time of day, or night, and care about her story – she’s not an anti hero, she’s outright unlikable.
Best to change her goal and motivation, she can be a racist but her reasons for change and motivation to take action need to relate to her flaw, be personal and not superficial.
What if the inciting incident is her discovery that she has a black half brother. Then she sets out to dispel him as family, but finds he is actually a great guy, who just so happen to be poverty stricken and destitute. They develop a sibling relationship and she changes her racist opinions as a result – make it about the human experience as appose to about money.
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