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A group of high school seniors head out to a lake house for a weekend to celebrate graduation. Things get out of hand after several of them begin using an illegal substance that opens the door for demonic possession and ultimately threatens their very existence.
Agreed with all the above.In addition these characters are the ones who created the problem in the first place - they need to clean up their own mess. Best if the inciting incident is forced upon them, this means that they must proactively take action to save others and be heroes instead of silly teRead more
Agreed with all the above.
In addition these characters are the ones who created the problem in the first place – they need to clean up their own mess. Best if the inciting incident is forced upon them, this means that they must proactively take action to save others and be heroes instead of silly teenagers that screwed up.
Seeing as there is such a long lineage of teens in the woods horror movies from Halloween to The Blair Witch Project, how is this going to provide a fresh take on the old concept?
See lessI’m not saying it can’t be done – the genre is a staple. Consider Cabin in the Woods it is a great example of a spin on the genre yet still observed its conventions.
A civil engineer saved a worker life during casting a Dam, but he slipped inside the reinforcement cage and trapped there. With walkie-talkie and 45 minutes the Civil Engineer have to clarify his care to his family and friends.
Agreed with Richiev. The plot is unclear and the wording confusing.Adding to this is the fact that there are two potential main characters, who do you prefer as the MC the engineer or the employee?
Agreed with Richiev. The plot is unclear and the wording confusing.
Adding to this is the fact that there are two potential main characters, who do you prefer as the MC the engineer or the employee?
See lessWhen several wealthy young ski bums appear to commit suicide, a nerdy female police investigator must find a psychopath in the clannish world of the ski resort
Did they commit suicide or not? I think what you mean is: died under suspicious circumstances. Describing the main character as female makes it sound as if you're trying to tap into a gender equality trend instead of writing a story about a woman - you wouldn't have specified 'male' if it was a boutRead more
Did they commit suicide or not? I think what you mean is: died under suspicious circumstances.
Describing the main character as female makes it sound as if you’re trying to tap into a gender equality trend instead of writing a story about a woman – you wouldn’t have specified ‘male’ if it was a bout a man…
Secondly if the MC is a detective, then finding the killer is just another day on the job. This may work in an episode of Columbo or NCIS, but doesn’t make for a compelling crime movie. What is it about this particular murders that makes her HAVE to find the killer? Was it personal i.e her brother, sister or lover were killed?
I suggest re drafting the logline with clear personal stake, and use the character flaw and job to describe the MC, all you need is a ‘her’ anywhere in the logline to indicate that she is a woman.
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