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When a groom-to-be discovers his identical twin has been replaced by an android, they must partner up to investigate his wedding party and find those responsible for the decoy.
Agreed with all the above ?comments. Also I can't explain why, but the premise tickled?my?funny?bone and conjured up a 4 Weddings and a Funeral angle in my mind. Have you considered making this a comedy?
Agreed with all the above ?comments.
Also I can’t explain why, but the premise tickled?my?funny?bone and conjured up a 4 Weddings and a Funeral angle in my mind. Have you considered making this a comedy?
See lessA true-blue beat cop volunteers as Internal Affair?s snitch to root out an anonymous traitor when seized drugs surface in his cloistered community.
Agreed with, DPG and Gaerhart in the above comments. It's hard to understand the concept from the logline, and the premise seems generic. I suggest you use personal stakes, character flaws and unique obstacles to make the premise more interesting.
Agreed with, DPG and Gaerhart in the above comments.
See lessIt’s hard to understand the concept from the logline, and the premise seems generic. I suggest you use personal stakes, character flaws and unique obstacles to make the premise more interesting.
When a hyper-sexualised girl band becomes trapped by a psychopathic religious woman, a pop singer must kill her band and manipulate her captor to escape.
You had me at hyper-sexualisde... Unfortunately, as the others have said, the inciting incident and motivation don't stack up. Aaron Sorkin interestingly says that he never starts with a character, rather he starts with a need and means. First he comes up with a good goal, then he comes up with theRead more
You had me at hyper-sexualisde…
Unfortunately, as the others have said, the inciting incident and motivation don’t stack up.
Aaron Sorkin interestingly says that he never starts with a character, rather he starts with a need and means. First he comes up with a good goal, then he comes up with the particular tactic the character will take to achieve the goal. I believe the same type of thinking could help in this instance.
What is it that a singer in a band such as this could really want? NAY, could really need? Right now her motivation for achieving her goal is vague and her goal of survival rather generic.
See lessHow would that goal be achieved? It’s this choice of tactic to achieve the goal that will define the character for you.