1. Posted: July 18, 2016In:

    After his terminally ill and clinically dead bitch of a wife miraculously revives her self, a depressed man must find a way to free himself of his life long commitment.

    Neer Shelter Singularity

    Thanks Dkpough1. Good point.

    Thanks Dkpough1.

    Good point.

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  2. Posted: July 18, 2016In:

    After his terminally ill and clinically dead bitch of a wife miraculously revives her self, a depressed man must find a way to free himself of his life long commitment.

    Neer Shelter Singularity

    Good point Craig, not sure how to mention it in the logline without giving away the ending. After she comes back they rush her to the hospital and the doctors tell him it's impossible to know how long she has, it could be either another year or a decade. He calls his daughter, tells her he loves herRead more

    Good point Craig, not sure how to mention it in the logline without giving away the ending.

    After she comes back they rush her to the hospital and the doctors tell him it’s impossible to know how long she has, it could be either another year or a decade. He calls his daughter, tells her he loves her and with a huge smile on his face jumps off the roof of the hospital – he’s finally free, albeit for 3.5 seconds but truly free.

    Here is a?revision:
    After his terminally ill and clinically dead bitch of a wife miraculously revives her self, a depressed man jumps of the roof of a very tall hospital to be free for the rest of his life.

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  3. Posted: July 18, 2016In:

    After his terminally ill and clinically dead bitch of a wife miraculously revives her self, a depressed man must find a way to free himself of his life long commitment.

    Neer Shelter Singularity

    This is a logline for a short black-comedy film.

    This is a logline for a short black-comedy film.

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