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A pert casino waitress accidentally tripled in stature by a scientist achieves her dream of Vegas stardom and falls in love wuth him, but sacrifices her size to save him when he’s kidnapped by a mobster. .,
The concept in this logline is confusing. Is it the change to her size that's her inciting incident? ?Is that what motivates her to take action and achieve something? If so what is it she needs to achieve as a result of the size change? If the goal is saving the scientist? Then the inciting incidentRead more
The concept in this logline is confusing.
Is it the change to her size that’s her inciting incident? ?Is that what motivates her to take action and achieve something?
If so what is it she needs to achieve as a result of the size change?
If the goal is saving the scientist? Then the inciting incident ?is the scientist getting kidnapped by the mob, and therefore that should be described in the beginning.
See lessA young transgender woman must reconcile with her estranged, conservative, mother in order to carry on her sex reassignment surgery in order to be the woman she was meant to be.
He may want his mother to accept him as a woman, but that can't be the only goal for the main character. Once he turns into a she post op, then the mother can be worked on to accept the transformation, therefore whether or not the mother accepts him as he is before he turns into a woman??is not a prRead more
He may want his mother to accept him as a woman, but that can’t be the only goal for the main character. Once he turns into a she post op, then the mother can be worked on to accept the transformation, therefore whether or not the mother accepts him as he is before he turns into a woman??is not a problem or a small one in the grand scheme of things. The stakes seem very low, as the others have mentioned best to connect the mother’s approval to a practical need of great importance to the main character.
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This doesn't describe a plot, rather a situation.Here are some questions to help you draft it again, try and include the answers to them: What is her inciting incident? What motivates her to need to take action? What is her goal?
This doesn’t describe a plot, rather a situation.
Here are some questions to help you draft it again, try and include the answers to them:
See lessWhat is her inciting incident?
What motivates her to need to take action?
What is her goal?