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A post apocalyptic space ship carrying the rich and famous is overthrown by the slaves that run it, as they discover their manual skills are the new worlds currency, deeming fame and fortunes irrelevant.
Their motivation is rather obvious - freedom, I don't think you need to explain why they overthrow the masters. This paradigm has been explored in many other films such as Elysium or Snow Piercer, in fact I'd argue that it's been a story telling staple right back since the old testament with the stoRead more
Their motivation is rather obvious – freedom, I don’t think you need to explain why they overthrow the masters.
This paradigm has been explored in many other films such as Elysium or Snow Piercer, in fact I’d argue that it’s been a story telling staple right back since the old testament with the story of the Exodus.
Point is, how will you set this apart? What is it about this particular slave over throwing master story that makes it more interesting than previous iterations?
See lessI suggest developing an interesting journey for one character and focus the concept/logline on him or her instead of the society as a whole.
A family counselor must conceal her alcoholic secret from her friends and clients over her marriage turning soar.
Best to define when the story starts, for example: After her marriage breaks down, an alcoholic marriage councillor must conceal her divorce from her clients in order to keep her practice.As mentioned the stakes seem a little low, what if she was trying to hide the divorce from her kids in order toRead more
Best to define when the story starts, for example:
After her marriage breaks down, an alcoholic marriage councillor must conceal her divorce from her clients in order to keep her practice.
As mentioned the stakes seem a little low, what if she was trying to hide the divorce from her kids in order to prevent any emotional trauma? This way the stakes characters are personal and not just business.
See lessWhen an amnesiac civilian is framed for massacring cops in a drug bust, he runs from bloodthirsty DEA agents to investigate his past and clear his name.
Agreed with the above comment. How exactly will he clear his name? How does he know he was framed if he suffers from amnesia?
Agreed with the above comment.
See lessHow exactly will he clear his name? How does he know he was framed if he suffers from amnesia?