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  1. Posted: June 13, 2016In: Comedy

    Seven art students, attempting to survive in a luxurious art museum while humanity ends, find that life continues in astonishing ways.

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    Added an answer on June 14, 2016 at 4:22 pm

    A good reference would be This is the End, but in that particular instance it had an ensemble cast of top comedy actors playing themselves - that on it's own is funny. Not sure how a bunch of new characters would be able to pull off a similar effect. And as noted above, best to specify a single goalRead more

    A good reference would be This is the End, but in that particular instance it had an ensemble cast of top comedy actors playing themselves – that on it’s own is funny. Not sure how a bunch of new characters would be able to pull off a similar effect.

    And as noted above, best to specify a single goal for a single protagonist.

    Perhaps it could be the curator trying to use his or her pragmatism to snap a bunch of airy head artists into shape in order to survive, this way the obstacle and goal are clear. Only thing you would need tough is to add some stakes, what will happen if they don’t do what they do in specific terms? Will they get eaten by Zombies or burn up in lava what ever it is it needs to be specified.

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  2. Posted: June 14, 2016In: Action

    Pressured into attending a frat party, an introverted college student must face-off with an aggressive frat boy to save herself from becoming a rape victim.

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    Added an answer on June 14, 2016 at 4:15 pm

    Agreed with DPG, I don't think there is enough story in this concept for more than a short film, and a short short at that. I also don't see what is unique about this concept that separates it from many other stories?about rape. Unfortunately we read and hear about violence against women?more and moRead more

    Agreed with DPG, I don’t think there is enough story in this concept for more than a short film, and a short short at that.

    I also don’t see what is unique about this concept that separates it from many other stories?about rape. Unfortunately we read and hear about violence against women?more and more nowadays, as bad as it may be, what is it about this particular rape that makes it more worth making a film about than the many others?

    Just to be clear, this is not an attempt to diminish the severity of the crime – I would have asked the same question if the concept was about murder.

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  3. Posted: June 14, 2016In: Thriller

    When Air Force One crashes on an uncharted island, a sole-surviving publicist must safeguard nuclear codes and alert rescue before the ambitious terrorists who attacked the plane find him.

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    Added an answer on June 14, 2016 at 4:09 pm

    This sounds interesting the stakes are high and the events are clear. I suggest re wording the logline so as to involves the antagonists earlier.After Air Force One is shot down in a terror attack over an uncharted Island, a sole surviving publicist must safeguard the launch codes until the rescue mRead more

    This sounds interesting the stakes are high and the events are clear.
    I suggest re wording the logline so as to involves the antagonists earlier.

    After Air Force One is shot down in a terror attack over an uncharted Island, a sole surviving publicist must safeguard the launch codes until the rescue mission arrives before the psychotic terrorists can find them.

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