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A mute street performer with PTSD, trapped and on the run in war-torn Europe, must use his wits and talents, and enlist the help of the French Resistance, to change the course of the second World War.
Agreed with Richiev.There is very little detail specified that describes the plot.Give your story a starting point and and end point, in other words define the plot at hand with an inciting incident and goal. In the original logline the MC could be in any country at any point in time between 1939 anRead more
Agreed with Richiev.
There is very little detail specified that describes the plot.
Give your story a starting point and and end point, in other words define the plot at hand with an inciting incident and goal. In the original logline the MC could be in any country at any point in time between 1939 and 1945, but it’s important for the reader to understand when and where a story takes place and why the character is motivated to achieve his or her goal.
See lessA fighter pilot wakes in an isolation ward, suffering memory loss from an experiment she supposedly signed up for. She and the other patients are told they can leave as soon as their memories return, but when people start disappearing or ending up dead, they suspect something more sinister is going on.
Less words. After a fighter pilot wakes in a hospital ward suffering from memory loss, she must?find clues to what happened to her before she ends up dead along with the other patients. It seems rather like many other films or shows that have characters waking up with amnesia, is there anything elseRead more
Less words.
After a fighter pilot wakes in a hospital ward suffering from memory loss, she must?find clues to what happened to her before she ends up dead along with the other patients.
It seems rather like many other films or shows that have characters waking up with amnesia, is there anything else that happens that makes it stand apart from the rest?
See lessAfter a failed stint as a professional motorcycle racer, a middle aged man, on the verge of losing everything, takes to the streets and races his way up the street racing ladder.
The logline describes a character and situation, but lacks a inciting incident and goal i.e a clear plot description. As Richieve suggested it can use some clarification of the stakes to explain why is he so motivated to do what he does. I would suggest to push the stakes even more make him a familyRead more
The logline describes a character and situation, but lacks a inciting incident and goal i.e a clear plot description.
As Richieve suggested it can use some clarification of the stakes to explain why is he so motivated to do what he does. I would suggest to push the stakes even more make him a family man so the need for a house is greater than just his own comfort.
My try:
See lessAfter his home is threatened with foreclosure a disgraced professional race driver, and single father of two, must take up illegal street racing to pay off the debt.