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VERSION A: “Consumed by fear of his impending mortality, a 31-year-old man race against time to break an ancient curse that kills all males in his lineage by age 32.” VERSION B: “A 31-year-old man races against time to break an ancient curse that kills all males in his lineage by age 32.”
Or, to throw another option out there.In Korea, your birthday is considered the date of conception, not birth.What if his brother moved to Korea and dies, then upon further investigation the MC discovers the curse.Now the hero has nine months to break it.
Or, to throw another option out there.
See lessIn Korea, your birthday is considered the date of conception, not birth.
What if his brother moved to Korea and dies, then upon further investigation the MC discovers the curse.
Now the hero has nine months to break it.
VERSION A: “Consumed by fear of his impending mortality, a 31-year-old man race against time to break an ancient curse that kills all males in his lineage by age 32.” VERSION B: “A 31-year-old man races against time to break an ancient curse that kills all males in his lineage by age 32.”
You're missing an inciting event and the specifics of the goal. What single event made him have to take action now? How, specifically, will he break the curse? What if he's one half of a pair of twins and he his brother or sister die at the end of act 1? Now he has the duration of the film to breakRead more
You’re missing an inciting event and the specifics of the goal. What single event made him have to take action now? How, specifically, will he break the curse?
What if he’s one half of a pair of twins and he his brother or sister die at the end of act 1? Now he has the duration of the film to break the curse or else. A quick Google search says it is medically possible for twins to be born an hour or so apart.
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Intended so or not, this is a profound question...All humans understand mythological constructs and archetypes on a subconscious level. Therefore, the subject matter is less important than the metaphors the story creates to mythology.Short answer, yes, none climbing audience could be interested in cRead more
Intended so or not, this is a profound question…
All humans understand mythological constructs and archetypes on a subconscious level. Therefore, the subject matter is less important than the metaphors the story creates to mythology.
Short answer, yes, none climbing audience could be interested in climbing stories. Long answer, it depends if it can be marketed well enough at this point in time.
As Richiev mentioned above, a logline is a tool for plot analysis, not marketing. That means that from a logline on this site, we simply can’t tell if a story will be interesting for a broad audience.
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