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Whenever a pain in the ass hitman sleeps, he always wakes up to a new future in the middle of his next hit until he decides to stay up and abandon mission, and discovers a thieves? guild?s plot to rob Big Pharm of a drug that grants immortal health, no sleep required.
Agreed with all the above comments. In order to help simplify the concept, I think best if you choose one job in which he wakes up and tell the story around that. This way you can use the first time he wakes up in the middle of a future mission as his inciting incident.
Agreed with all the above comments.
In order to help simplify the concept, I think best if you choose one job in which he wakes up and tell the story around that. This way you can use the first time he wakes up in the middle of a future mission as his inciting incident.
See less300 years ago, the Penitente rose from the ashes of the Pueblo Revolts. Today Diana believes her family’s dark past has caught up to her when the body of a crucified man is found in the desert.
Hard to add any useful notes to the comments above. I would say that for me the logline is confusing and vague in its descriptions, I needed to read it twice to get an idea of the characters and their actions.
Hard to add any useful notes to the comments above.
See lessI would say that for me the logline is confusing and vague in its descriptions, I needed to read it twice to get an idea of the characters and their actions.
After the king asks him to serve as his advisor, the lord of the North discovers the murder plot of his predecessor as an attempt to cover up the heir’s illegitimate claim to the throne.
True, the books had already provided a "built in audience", so the pitch would have been a mere technicality at best. I was just trying to logline a complex narrative.
True, the books had already provided a “built in audience”, so the pitch would have been a mere technicality at best.
See lessI was just trying to logline a complex narrative.