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Part of the municipal park was deforested. The wild cat Mitzi, remaining orphaned with her brothers, has to leave her home destroyed by wood cutters. She reaches the Big Park Reservation (Rodnei Mountains National Park), where she finds shelter in the abandoned cottage of the forester. It’s Christmas Eve and the inhabitants of the Big Park are preparing for the celebration. Mitzi and her brothers are having trouble even here, being disturbed by the bad guys: Kit-Bandit and Max-Mask. They dress up in wolves in order to scare them away from the reservation. Their true identity is discovered by the wild cat Stripy and his friends. The scheme is foiled and to Mitzi and her brothers are offered a better life, proof that their guardian angel has not left them in trouble…
It sounds like the deforestation was the inciting incident, therefore, according to the 'Formula' tab (please check it out as it will help you) the logline could be: After her home is destroyed by deforestation, a wildcat must protect her younger brothers in a hostile world. This is a good start, buRead more
It sounds like the deforestation was the inciting incident, therefore, according to the ‘Formula’ tab (please check it out as it will help you) the logline could be:
After her home is destroyed by deforestation, a wildcat must protect her younger brothers in a hostile world.
This is a good start, but as stated in the ‘Formula’ tab, a logline needs to define a clear goal for the main character.
What is the wildcat’s end game? Survival is an ongoing effort with seemingly no end in sight, what achievement will beyond a doubt signify that she has achieved safety for her brothers?
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This might not work as a story for screen - the bulk of the story involves inner processes; "... I really want it to be about the consequences of her decision which is to go to college and the guilt she feels...". You should consider writing this as a novel, simply as you can directly describe the iRead more
This might not work as a story for screen – the bulk of the story involves inner processes; “… I really want it to be about the consequences of her decision which is to go to college and the guilt she feels…”. You should consider writing this as a novel, simply as you can directly describe the inner guilt she feels without needing to visualize it.
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In all iterations of the logline thus far, the protag is described as being rather passive and emotionally disconnected. If it were me and my wife/girlfriend was killed, I'd be out there kicking ass to find the culprit - the rhetoric in a logline is as important as the details.What specifically MUSTRead more
In all iterations of the logline thus far, the protag is described as being rather passive and emotionally disconnected. If it were me and my wife/girlfriend was killed, I’d be out there kicking ass to find the culprit – the rhetoric in a logline is as important as the details.
What specifically MUST he do as a result of his loved one’s murder? Stop the cartel? Prevent others from being killed in the same way? His motivation to react to the event must be crystal clear.
My try:
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