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Enslaved in the desert, a young boy with bowl cut must race a car with no wheels to win his freedom but when a priest forces him to join a cult, he must learn to fly a chrome airplane to kill tin soldiers before they destroy a planet of Rastafarian toad men.
Good joke logline, my reaction was the same as DPG but I actually laughed after reading the title, well done!
Good joke logline, my reaction was the same as DPG but I actually laughed after reading the title, well done!
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It would be more interesting if the stakes were higher for the MC. What if he just got offered the opportunity of a life time - going on the road with a big band, he has to choose between fatherhood and fame. Better yet he tries to make it work and sets off on the road with the big band but at the sRead more
It would be more interesting if the stakes were higher for the MC.
What if he just got offered the opportunity of a life time – going on the road with a big band, he has to choose between fatherhood and fame. Better yet he tries to make it work and sets off on the road with the big band but at the same time brings his pregnant girlfriend along and only through trial and error realises that he can’t make family life and life on the road work at the same time.
See lessThrough various interactions with old friends and family at her mom’s funeral, a bitter, middle-aged woman learns that she may have been the most important thing in her mom’s life – even though they haven’t spoken in twenty years.
Agreed with Richiev, the first sentence in your logline describes a moment best left for act 3 or end of act 2 - a powerful moment with a potent meaning in which the audience learns through a visual that the MC realises she was wrong all along. Ergo she learns to be a better person and only after thRead more
Agreed with Richiev, the first sentence in your logline describes a moment best left for act 3 or end of act 2 – a powerful moment with a potent meaning in which the audience learns through a visual that the MC realises she was wrong all along. Ergo she learns to be a better person and only after that happens she is allowed to achieve her outer goal be it re kindling a lost love or making piece with her own daughter.
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