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A sadistic killer lures young girls into his trap when they log on a mega church’s good samaritan app. A small town deputy must face his own dark past in order to stop the killer before he strikes again.
Agreed with the above comments.Also the MC isn't doing much other than his job, best to give him higher stakes that make catching the killer either personal or career critical.
Agreed with the above comments.
Also the MC isn’t doing much other than his job, best to give him higher stakes that make catching the killer either personal or career critical.
See lessFailed documentarian roams the New Mexico mountain hunting a story until he stumbles onto a cult of women crucifying drug dealers to purge sin. He believes he’s found the story of a lifetime if he can live to tell it. Breaking Bad meets The Lottery.
Agreed with Craig. Best if you identify the specific goal he has to achieve and make that the focus of the logline. As a result of discovering the cult what must he do? It's the answer to this question that will make the concept interesting.
Agreed with Craig.
Best if you identify the specific goal he has to achieve and make that the focus of the logline.
See lessAs a result of discovering the cult what must he do? It’s the answer to this question that will make the concept interesting.
Presumed killed during a fierce storm, an astronaut left on Mars must survive with meager resources and no communication with earth until the next mission to the planet — in 4 years.
The high concept nature of the film is great, and yes it drew me in to watch, however I believe that the shifting dramatic point of view throughout weakened the impact of the story.
The high concept nature of the film is great, and yes it drew me in to watch, however I believe that the shifting dramatic point of view throughout weakened the impact of the story.
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