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When an English apprentice witch’s last correspondence lesson doesn’t arrive, she must take her 3 young charges and a conman on a flying bed to search for a missing spell that will help drive back invading German forces. [Bedknobs and Broomsticks]
True her specific role in the lives of the children could be described differently and yes she is reluctant, but ultimately the function she fulfills is that of an assigned nanny. This is what a reader would need to know from the logline.
True her specific role in the lives of the children could be described differently and yes she is reluctant, but ultimately the function she fulfills is that of an assigned nanny. This is what a reader would need to know from the logline.
See lessWhen Einar Wegener poses as Lili for his artist wife Gerda he becomes so comfortable in her character that he discovers his true nature and together they go through the emotional and agonising process to undergo the very first sex-change operation in history so that he can truly become Lily.
No need for names. The inciting incident is the change in his view of himself, a complex situation but one that could still be described with more economy. After an artist's husband realises he is a transgender, he and his wife must fight emotional and psychological hurdles amidst early 20th centuryRead more
No need for names. The inciting incident is the change in his view of himself, a complex situation but one that could still be described with more economy.
After an artist’s husband realises he is a transgender, he and his wife must fight emotional and psychological hurdles amidst early 20th century?bigotry in order to have the first ever sex change operation.
See lessWhen an English apprentice witch’s last correspondence lesson doesn’t arrive, she must take her 3 young charges and a conman on a flying bed to search for a missing spell that will help drive back invading German forces. [Bedknobs and Broomsticks]
The complication for the Angela Lansbury character comes about as a result of her working as a nanny and needs to be elaborated on, but only mentioning 3 young charges isn't clear enough. The lesson not arriving reads as having less drama than it could have and her allies are not necessary for the lRead more
The complication for the Angela Lansbury character comes about as a result of her working as a nanny and needs to be elaborated on, but only mentioning 3 young charges isn’t clear enough. The lesson not arriving reads as having less drama than it could have and her allies are not necessary for the logline.
After her? last correspondence lesson goes missing an apprentice witch, who works as a nanny during WW2, must take her 3 young charges on a flying bed to search for a missing spell that will help her drive back invading German forces.
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