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John Dillinger tangles with gunslingers and the undead in a lawless dust bowl town.
Agreed with DPG. Also the logline describes two potential antagonists the undead and a gunslinger, but which one will cause the most conflict and to that matter provide the last obstacle in act 3? That's the only one that should be in the logline.
Agreed with DPG.
Also the logline describes two potential antagonists the undead and a gunslinger, but which one will cause the most conflict and to that matter provide the last obstacle in act 3? That’s the only one that should be in the logline.
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This sounds like a comedic take on Daylight, it has potential but it reads a bit flat. The logline needs an antagonist (cliche as it may be) that will resist the heroes leadership, perhaps a Buddy Holly impersonator...
This sounds like a comedic take on Daylight, it has potential but it reads a bit flat. The logline needs an antagonist (cliche as it may be) that will resist the heroes leadership, perhaps a Buddy Holly impersonator…
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Agreed with DPG. Also best to be more specific in the descriptions of a logline, the antagonist description says very little about how they would be a problem for the main character. However if they would be described as a desperate paparazzi then the potential for conflict is immediately understoodRead more
Agreed with DPG.
Also best to be more specific in the descriptions of a logline, the antagonist description says very little about how they would be a problem for the main character. However if they would be described as a desperate paparazzi then the potential for conflict is immediately understood. Similarly the main character description is vague perhaps best to describe him or her as paranoid, reclusive or both, this way they come across as possibly baring psychological issues and exposure for them could be disastrous.
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