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  1. Posted: November 15, 2018In: Thriller

    After waking up in cells with only a 12-hour countdown and a row of switches on the wall, two individuals must figure out how to work together in isolation in order to escape.

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    Saw with switches... What is it about the cell they wake up in that makes it scarey? What's the danger they face? Also, what's unique about these particular characters?

    Saw with switches…

    What is it about the cell they wake up in that makes it scarey? What’s the danger they face?

    Also, what’s unique about these particular characters?

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  2. Posted: November 16, 2018In: Fantasy

    a young rain-maker must quickly master her abilities to save the kingdom from the Ruler of storms

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    agreed with all the above comments. I'll add that in this case, the setting and period sound important so it might be best to indicate where and when this story takes place.

    agreed with all the above comments. I’ll add that in this case, the setting and period sound important so it might be best to indicate where and when this story takes place.

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  3. Posted: November 16, 2018In: Drama

    Living in poverty, a neglected boy discovers the power of his imagination through reading but struggles to escape the harsh realities of his abuse.

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    Agreed with DPG. The crucial details of the narrative aren't described. I'll add that the main character's goal needs to be clear in your logline but is altogether missing.

    Agreed with DPG.

    The crucial details of the narrative aren’t described. I’ll add that the main character’s goal needs to be clear in your logline but is altogether missing.

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