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Revised (Round 2)- After a tragedy in London, Ohio, sends a dead soldier to the Veil World of the Supernatural, The soldier must stop a werewolf from entering the veil and destroying reality and exposing the supernatural to world, provoking chaos and destruction.
If the soldier was transported to the veil world it would have to already be open, therefore, the warewolf doesn't need to open anything - it's already been done. OR am I missing something... Did the soldier find another way into the veil world? Sorry, I can't seem to get my head around the mechanisRead more
If the soldier was transported to the veil world it would have to already be open, therefore, the warewolf doesn’t need to open anything – it’s already been done. OR am I missing something… Did the soldier find another way into the veil world? Sorry, I can’t seem to get my head around the mechanisms at play.
See lessRevised: Exes – A 25 year old unemployed woman asks her depressed ex-boyfriend from college for a urine sample in order to pass a drug test for a potential job at her Father’s sign shop. In doing this she wants to enable herself to move out of her Mother’s house and re-enter the dating scene.
The cause and effect connecting all these plot points is tenuous at best. What is her one primary goal and subsequent obstacle in achieving it?
The cause and effect connecting all these plot points is tenuous at best. What is her one primary goal and subsequent obstacle in achieving it?
See lessA man looks for how his brother died, only to find it in the deadliest game known to man, a deadly version of soccer, which he plans to win become unstable when he finds the truth about his brother. (I revised)
Agreed with all the above. I'll add that the one most important story element a logline must include (not imply) is a goal - what is your main character's goal? Revenge? Stop the deadly game? Save the other players from a similar fate? Whatever it is, you need to describe it in the logline.
Agreed with all the above.
I’ll add that the one most important story element a logline must include (not imply) is a goal – what is your main character’s goal? Revenge? Stop the deadly game? Save the other players from a similar fate? Whatever it is, you need to describe it in the logline.
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