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As the United Nations attempt to bring stability to the city of Dajar after the fall of a tyrannical regime, the lines between peacekeepers and soldiers become blurred when a new warlord rises and begins to butcher his way through Somalia.
Agreed with the above. A good film to analyze as research is Black Hawk Down, albeit a vastly different story, it has a similar back drop and like minded characters dealing with the same kind of dilemmas. Secondly, to help clarify the stakes, best to identify the exact nature of the antagonist, thisRead more
Agreed with the above.
A good film to analyze as research is Black Hawk Down, albeit a vastly different story, it has a similar back drop and like minded characters dealing with the same kind of dilemmas.
Secondly, to help clarify the stakes, best to identify the exact nature of the antagonist, this is so you will be able to specify the degree and type of danger the MC (who ever that ends up being) will face.
Hope this helps.
See lessAn archeologist’s family struggles to stay alive, after a failed expedition in the remote jungles of the Amazon awakens a supposed extinct, cannibalistic humanoid that terrorizes and hunts them, one by one.
An inciting incident would give the story a starting point and add legitimacy to the creature's vengeful tendencies.E.g: After disrupting the tomb of an ancient beast an archaeologist must fight a cannibalistic humanoid to get his family safely out of the Amazon.Hope this helps.
An inciting incident would give the story a starting point and add legitimacy to the creature’s vengeful tendencies.
E.g:
After disrupting the tomb of an ancient beast an archaeologist must fight a cannibalistic humanoid to get his family safely out of the Amazon.
Hope this helps.
See lessWhen a group of graffiti writers beat up a random on the beaches of Sydney, it leads to a true life tale of redemption and forgiveness.
You have too many coincidences planned for your story: "...the protagonist, a random twenty-something out with his girlfriend at a Sydney beach and we witness a random brutal assault on him then in a twist, we follow the taggers as they party out in the Sydney CBD for the night in a music video-likeRead more
You have too many coincidences planned for your story:
“…the protagonist, a random twenty-something out with his girlfriend at a Sydney beach and we witness a random brutal assault on him then in a twist, we follow the taggers as they party out in the Sydney CBD for the night in a music video-like montage very much like a MTV music video. Then, by a chance of coincidence we see two of the taggers return in the morning as they?re chased by younger taggers until a good Samaritan steps in? The victim by either coincidence or fate…”
Best to have a sequence of events connected via a direct cause and effect relationship than coincidences, as a way of creating plot points.
Hope this helps.
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