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Small town aspiring singer-turned-nanny struggles to adjust to life in affluent Studio City, CA while pursuing her dreams of success and navigating through a minefield of secrets, fame, and scandal.
Agreed with DPG, not sure how this will fare with such a "seen it before" type story.Concept aside, the logline doesn't fulfill it's primary function - to describe a plot. In order to describe a plot a logline needs to convey specific details about the story, such as; the main character's flaw, herRead more
Agreed with DPG, not sure how this will fare with such a “seen it before” type story.
Concept aside, the logline doesn’t fulfill it’s primary function – to describe a plot. In order to describe a plot a logline needs to convey specific details about the story, such as; the main character’s flaw, her goal and inciting incident.
Hope this helps.
See lessCELTIC BAYOU embodies the triumph of the human spirit against all odds, as it tells the story of Gretchen Stevens, a teen-aged pupil at an all-girls dance academy who must confront a tyrannical substitute teacher, devious fellow students, past physical injuries and her own troubled past; all of which stand between her and her life’s dream.
A good page to read for help with drafting loglines can be found here: https://loglines.org/howto/ Hope this helps.
A good page to read for help with drafting loglines can be found here:
https://loglines.org/howto/
Hope this helps.
See lessTwo young men with opposite lives from opposite sides of the world unwittingly exchange destinies as one encounters the other, and the other encounters a vision of God.
This concept is confusing due to the lack of a plot and a mix of themes. Who is the main character? What is their goal? What is the inciting incident? These questions need to be answered in the next draft of the logline. Hope this helps.
This concept is confusing due to the lack of a plot and a mix of themes.
Who is the main character? What is their goal? What is the inciting incident?
These questions need to be answered in the next draft of the logline.
Hope this helps.
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