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  1. Posted: October 11, 2015In: Action

    A distrusting psychic interrogator, who steals information by entering a suspect?s mind, becomes infected by a recent suspect’s consciousness and must team up with his inner demons to stop his mind being taking over .

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    Added an answer on October 11, 2015 at 7:14 pm

    What starts him off to team up with his inner demon? What is the inciting incident? Also what is a psychic interrogator? Is this a real job or made up in the world of the story? Lastly it is a bit confusing that he needs to prevent the terrorist from reclaiming stolen secretes from his own mind. PerRead more

    What starts him off to team up with his inner demon? What is the inciting incident?
    Also what is a psychic interrogator? Is this a real job or made up in the world of the story?

    Lastly it is a bit confusing that he needs to prevent the terrorist from reclaiming stolen secretes from his own mind.
    Perhaps simplify this and say he has to stop the terrorist form gaining national security secrets?

    Hope this helps.

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  2. Posted: October 9, 2015In: Drama

    When a distrusted scientist predicts that a massive flood will destroy a whole town, a young female journalist must use her profession to convince the people to leave the town before the flood comes.

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    Added an answer on October 10, 2015 at 11:57 am

    A modern Noah basically. Only it seams as most of the action will be taken by the journalist not the scientist, so who is the main character?

    A modern Noah basically.

    Only it seams as most of the action will be taken by the journalist not the scientist, so who is the main character?

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  3. Posted: October 9, 2015In: Student Loglines

    When a financial analyst who only lives for work meets her true love, a laidback skateboarder, over a late night release party she wakes up next day realizing she got pregnant. In love as she is she decides to move in together with her newly found love and start family life. Though, to handle everyday family-life after 20 years as a workaholic puts her whole self-image back at work at stake!

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    Added an answer on October 9, 2015 at 1:50 pm

    This is a very long description that provides too little information about the plot for it to be effective. Here it is again only with much of the "fat" trimmed off: After a workaholic falls pregnant she decides to move in with her lover to raise a family despite her over developed work ethic. The MRead more

    This is a very long description that provides too little information about the plot for it to be effective.

    Here it is again only with much of the “fat” trimmed off:
    After a workaholic falls pregnant she decides to move in with her lover to raise a family despite her over developed work ethic.

    The MC’s goal is not clear what does she actually want to achieve? Does she prioritize her family over her career? Or her career over her family?
    The stakes seam very low, what’s the worst that will happen if she chooses either? Not sure this would make for enough of a plot over 110 minutes.

    Hope this helps.

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