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After an Alien invasion leaves their planet in ruins, Impulsive and rebellious Jake must lead his friends in a galactic search to rescue thier families from the Aliens that captured them.
This describes a generic epic space journey much like many others as in 2015 most epic space journeys will sound generic. What is it about this particular MC that makes this epic space journey special? Why will this be such a feet for him specifically to achieve? How will the major obstacle and antaRead more
This describes a generic epic space journey much like many others as in 2015 most epic space journeys will sound generic.
What is it about this particular MC that makes this epic space journey special?
Why will this be such a feet for him specifically to achieve?
How will the major obstacle and antagonist be especially challenging for a person like him?
I think the answers to these questions are what will make this logline capture someones interest.
Hope this helps.
See lessWhile a group of older teens are on a camping trip secretly building an unregistered ship,their planet is attacked and destroyed those not killed were taken.The teens have to rescue their families/friends.
And remember that even way back in 1977 George Lucas still had to pitch to many producers most of which turned him down before getting a budget for a complex scifi production. Even after getting the budget it was minimal and barley sufficient to produce the first Star Wars film. There is no visual eRead more
And remember that even way back in 1977 George Lucas still had to pitch to many producers most of which turned him down before getting a budget for a complex scifi production. Even after getting the budget it was minimal and barley sufficient to produce the first Star Wars film.
There is no visual effect or super-dooper scifi gizmo you can describe in a logline, pitch or synopsis that will be surprising or unique to a producer. Most of them and their audiences have seen enough of these types of films to render them unimpressed by another CGI spectacular event.
In my mind what you could use to, as DPG puts it, hook their attention is a compelling unique story about an empathetic character with a powerful inner journey.
See lessAt a popular theme park, a new dancer/actor secretly experiences grief and rivalry from the other females in the show as she tries to fit in as the new girl, and survive as slowly employees are disappearing and no one knows why.
Due to time zones DPG and Richiev posted my exact thoughts before I had the chance to. I would make it more personal and specify the inciting incident more: After her only friend is mysteriously killed an unpopular shy dancer at a busy theme park must find the murderer before more are killed and sheRead more
Due to time zones DPG and Richiev posted my exact thoughts before I had the chance to.
I would make it more personal and specify the inciting incident more:
After her only friend is mysteriously killed an unpopular shy dancer at a busy theme park must find the murderer before more are killed and she becomes his next victim.
Hope this helps.
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