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A playboy Hollywood producer must embark on a roadtrip from Hell with his long lost rebellious son. What will happen when these opposites are forced to attract.
What is the inner journey going to be? The outer journey should act as a metaphor for the inner journey of the MC (especially in a road trip movie) as such what is the starting point for the MC? What is the inciting incident? And what is his flaw? As DPG mentioned the odd couple road trip has been dRead more
What is the inner journey going to be?
The outer journey should act as a metaphor for the inner journey of the MC (especially in a road trip movie) as such what is the starting point for the MC? What is the inciting incident? And what is his flaw?
As DPG mentioned the odd couple road trip has been done a story such as this needs a good inner journey to empower the character and increase audience interest. In this instance if you were to describe the inciting incident, character flaw and goal clearly the reader could imagine the charters’s trajectory and understand he will have an arch throughout the story.
Hope this helps.
See lessA playboy Hollywood producer must embark on a roadtrip from Hell with his long lost rebellious son. What will happen when these opposites are forced to attract.
What is the inner journey going to be? The outer journey should act as a metaphor for the inner journey of the MC (especially in a road trip movie) as such what is the starting point for the MC? What is the inciting incident? And what is his flaw? As DPG mentioned the odd couple road trip has been dRead more
What is the inner journey going to be?
The outer journey should act as a metaphor for the inner journey of the MC (especially in a road trip movie) as such what is the starting point for the MC? What is the inciting incident? And what is his flaw?
As DPG mentioned the odd couple road trip has been done a story such as this needs a good inner journey to empower the character and increase audience interest. In this instance if you were to describe the inciting incident, character flaw and goal clearly the reader could imagine the charters’s trajectory and understand he will have an arch throughout the story.
Hope this helps.
See lessIn a future where writing is forbidden and technology rules, the last Scribe, and an Android implanted with humanities history must stop an evil corporation from enslaving the masses with its latest device.
In the last iteration of the logline the read is smother as it is less wordy but as DPG remarked the basic logic introduced raises more questions than it should. Additionally what is at stake for the scribe except loosing work? What makes this a personal story for him? Why do they need to stop the cRead more
In the last iteration of the logline the read is smother as it is less wordy but as DPG remarked the basic logic introduced raises more questions than it should.
Additionally what is at stake for the scribe except loosing work?
What makes this a personal story for him?
Why do they need to stop the corporation now as in what starts them off on their journeys?
Hope this helps.
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