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A mysterious boy is on the run after having his identity discovered. But will he escape from the prospect of the hunters chasing him every second.
What DPG said. Also the idea of a logline is to part with the perfect amount of information to explain the plot and ideally create intrigue. The intrigue part can come about by keeping certain elements descriptions vague but in this case there is too many too vague descriptions and not enough informRead more
What DPG said.
Also the idea of a logline is to part with the perfect amount of information to explain the plot and ideally create intrigue. The intrigue part can come about by keeping certain elements descriptions vague but in this case there is too many too vague descriptions and not enough information provided.
Therefore the questions above.
Hope this helps.
See lessA mysterious boy is on the run after having his identity discovered. But will he escape from the prospect of the hunters chasing him every second.
What DPG said. Also the idea of a logline is to part with the perfect amount of information to explain the plot and ideally create intrigue. The intrigue part can come about by keeping certain elements descriptions vague but in this case there is too many too vague descriptions and not enough informRead more
What DPG said.
Also the idea of a logline is to part with the perfect amount of information to explain the plot and ideally create intrigue. The intrigue part can come about by keeping certain elements descriptions vague but in this case there is too many too vague descriptions and not enough information provided.
Therefore the questions above.
Hope this helps.
See lessA young candle maker with hidden magic powers teams up with an aloof dragon knight to battle monsters in a dark realm while seeking to rescue her twin brother before a sinister sorcerer uses him to activate an ancient weapon.
Good points raised by DPG and Richiev. The character flaw in many fantasy movies is normally a cliche and waters down the impact of the journey. I think that both DPG and Richiev's suggestions put together are the better option only after she learns her lesson and completes her inner journey is sheRead more
Good points raised by DPG and Richiev.
The character flaw in many fantasy movies is normally a cliche and waters down the impact of the journey. I think that both DPG and Richiev’s suggestions put together are the better option only after she learns her lesson and completes her inner journey is she able to save her brother.
Karel Segeres mentioned the order of the inner and outer goal achievements needing to be that only after the MC achieves the inner goal and completes their arc are they allowed to achieve the outer goal as a reward.
Basically what this means is that achieving the outer journey’s goal is a feat and raises its significants, significantly.
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