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A teenage girl returns home to her whole family executed and must go undercover to find her family's killers where she finds that she isn't fully human.
I think it is becoming evident that the mixture of genres in the logline is hindering most readers understanding of your story. I strongly suggest taking on board the above comments and focusing on the murder mystery in the logline and not mention the supernatural elements at all. Example: After theRead more
I think it is becoming evident that the mixture of genres in the logline is hindering most readers understanding of your story.
I strongly suggest taking on board the above comments and focusing on the murder mystery in the logline and not mention the supernatural elements at all.
Example:
After the family of an introvert girl is murdered she must flee her home to escape death and goes on the road to catch the mysterious looking killer.
If you use the antagonist description as a hint at super natural you can suggest that there is a genre mix in the story. Other wise it doesn’t matter what race the girl is or isn’t her story still starts after her family is killed and she her action is to catch the killer.
See lessA teenage girl returns home to her whole family executed and must go undercover to find her family's killers where she finds that she isn't fully human.
I think it is becoming evident that the mixture of genres in the logline is hindering most readers understanding of your story. I strongly suggest taking on board the above comments and focusing on the murder mystery in the logline and not mention the supernatural elements at all. Example: After theRead more
I think it is becoming evident that the mixture of genres in the logline is hindering most readers understanding of your story.
I strongly suggest taking on board the above comments and focusing on the murder mystery in the logline and not mention the supernatural elements at all.
Example:
After the family of an introvert girl is murdered she must flee her home to escape death and goes on the road to catch the mysterious looking killer.
If you use the antagonist description as a hint at super natural you can suggest that there is a genre mix in the story. Other wise it doesn’t matter what race the girl is or isn’t her story still starts after her family is killed and she her action is to catch the killer.
See lessA teenage girl returns home to her whole family executed and must go undercover to find her family's killers where she finds that she isn't fully human.
Agreed with Gilgamesh. What genre is this story? What time period and location? The need for the girl to pursue the killers could be explained if the story was set in the old west or 17th century Prussia for example. But the combination of genres as a result of the directive and scifi elements in thRead more
Agreed with Gilgamesh.
What genre is this story?
What time period and location?
The need for the girl to pursue the killers could be explained if the story was set in the old west or 17th century Prussia for example.
But the combination of genres as a result of the directive and scifi elements in the logline could confuse readers.
Hope this helps.
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