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A young man discovers a journal from the future (writen by a future version of him-self) and makes it his mission to attempt to prevent the events that lead to the apocalyptic future from happening; such as mutant fly attacks, alien invasions, zombie infections, evil clones, time vortexes and activists.
Perhaps try breaking this down into the building blocks of the premise the series will be based on. After a young man is given a journal from the future outlining the set of events which leads to the destruction of humanity he must stop them from happening in order to save the world. Also is there aRead more
Perhaps try breaking this down into the building blocks of the premise the series will be based on.
After a young man is given a journal from the future outlining the set of events which leads to the destruction of humanity he must stop them from happening in order to save the world.
Also is there a personal aspect you could bring into it? Such as he needs to save the world to save his family or exact revenge on the wrong doers for killing his wife.
However it is unclear, as DPG suggested, whether this is an outline of the concept for a franchise as a whole or the logline for a specific story with in it.
Hope this helps.
See lessA young man discovers a journal from the future (writen by a future version of him-self) and makes it his mission to attempt to prevent the events that lead to the apocalyptic future from happening; such as mutant fly attacks, alien invasions, zombie infections, evil clones, time vortexes and activists.
Perhaps try breaking this down into the building blocks of the premise the series will be based on. After a young man is given a journal from the future outlining the set of events which leads to the destruction of humanity he must stop them from happening in order to save the world. Also is there aRead more
Perhaps try breaking this down into the building blocks of the premise the series will be based on.
After a young man is given a journal from the future outlining the set of events which leads to the destruction of humanity he must stop them from happening in order to save the world.
Also is there a personal aspect you could bring into it? Such as he needs to save the world to save his family or exact revenge on the wrong doers for killing his wife.
However it is unclear, as DPG suggested, whether this is an outline of the concept for a franchise as a whole or the logline for a specific story with in it.
Hope this helps.
See lessA young journalist must turn detective when he gets caught up in the fatal conspiracy behind the Jack the Ripper murders.
"...gets caught up in the fatal conspiracy..." is a vague description of an inciting incident. what exactly was it that got him caught up? Did someone frame him? Is his life threatened somehow? etc... Hope this helps.
“…gets caught up in the fatal conspiracy…” is a vague description of an inciting incident. what exactly was it that got him caught up?
Did someone frame him? Is his life threatened somehow? etc…
Hope this helps.
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