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after 3 teenagers are killed which exploring a school thats been closed for 20 yearsan aging cop decides to take on the case and he eventually realizes there is more to this case than he could ever imagine.
The sentence doesn't make much sense due to the grammar errors, as a result, it is hard to understand the concept. Who is exploring the school that was closed 20 years ago? How is this relevant to the plot? What I did understand was that the main character is an aging cop and the inciting incident iRead more
The sentence doesn’t make much sense due to the grammar errors, as a result, it is hard to understand the concept.
Who is exploring the school that was closed 20 years ago? How is this relevant to the plot?
What I did understand was that the main character is an aging cop and the inciting incident is the 3 teenagers being killed. If that is the case, why does the school need to be mentioned in the logline?
Also “…realizes there is more to this case…” is too vague to include in the logline. What does he realize and how? If this is going to be his obstacle best to describe it in a clear and accurate manner.
Hope this helps.
See lessA young man discovers a journal from the future (writen by a future version of him-self) and makes it his mission to attempt to prevent the events that lead to the apocalyptic future from happening; such as mutant fly attacks, alien invasions, zombie infections, evil clones, time vortexes and activists.
If he dosen't know how bad the future is why does he act? The inciting incident is him being told the world will end there for he needs to take action to stop it. This event in which he is given this knowledge must be on screen or page and must happen to him to motivate him.
If he dosen’t know how bad the future is why does he act?
The inciting incident is him being told the world will end there for he needs to take action to stop it. This event in which he is given this knowledge must be on screen or page and must happen to him to motivate him.
See lessA young man discovers a journal from the future (writen by a future version of him-self) and makes it his mission to attempt to prevent the events that lead to the apocalyptic future from happening; such as mutant fly attacks, alien invasions, zombie infections, evil clones, time vortexes and activists.
If he dosen't know how bad the future is why does he act? The inciting incident is him being told the world will end there for he needs to take action to stop it. This event in which he is given this knowledge must be on screen or page and must happen to him to motivate him.
If he dosen’t know how bad the future is why does he act?
The inciting incident is him being told the world will end there for he needs to take action to stop it. This event in which he is given this knowledge must be on screen or page and must happen to him to motivate him.
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